My little baby brothers birthday-By George

           MY baby brother birthday

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write paragraphs that begins with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.

Hooray! its my baby brother birthday. 

On a sunny holiday I went to my cousins house with my mum dad and brother, last week we have a BBQ because it was my cousins little brothers birthday.My uncle was cooking sausages, chicken leg and chicken stick with some veges in it.While it was cooking my cousin, brother and I put my little baby brother on the trolley and started taking him for a walk down the road.After that we push him next to the flowers, and he was steering at them, so we gave him a orange thick flower for him to hold.

Soon we went back and ate the food and it tasted very delicious.Later there were cakes and inside it had chocolate cream, with strawberry desert food . It was the yummiest cake I'v  ever had. 


One sunny holiday my parents and I went to my cousins house because it was my little cousins birthday and we had a BBQ.My uncle was cooking sausages,chicken leg and chicken stick with veges in it.While it was cooking my cousin and I put my baby cousin in the trolley and started taking him for a walk down the road.After that we put him next to the flower for him to look at.So we gave him a thick orange flower for him to hold

After a while we went back and started to eat the food that my uncle cooked, it was delicious.Then there were chocolate cakes, it had chocolate cream, cherry and strawberry dice'rt. 


Finally we played outside and played with my cousins and had lots of fun playing tag.

Mission day-By George

Learning intention:We are learning to write a recount using adjectives, verbs and adverbs.

Success Criteria:I am successful when I can use describing words, verbs and adjectives correctly.

Yey! its Mission day!!!

On Mission day St.Patrick school went to church.We sang many songs and prayed to God and Jesus.Next, we went back to our class room and set up our activities.We had fishing, books for sale and hanging apples.When the bell rang we went outside to play with the activities.

The first activities I played was fishing.I enjoyed it because I kept dropping the candy.Finally I caught one "chocolate fish" with my fishing rod and I ate it.Later , it was my turn to look after the fishing game.There were small children who came to play.

 I enjoyed watching the children.They pay more than 50 cents, so I gave them their change.After lunch, Mrs. Dines asked us to watch cartoons in room 8, we said 'yes'.We couldn't finish the movie as it was raffle time. We all gathered in front of room 6 under the big shade.

The teacher had to pick a ticket for a winner.A girl in room 8 won a prize.Next,she called out another ticket and it was me. I won a big Lego box! When another ticket was pulled out, I won a Lego box again, and everyone cheered and clapped for me.

School holidays-By George

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount about my holidays.

''A swimming family!''
In the holidays my family and I went to the pools.We played ball tiggy in the kids pool.It was fun because I can hold my breath underwater and nobody could find me. We went to the cold pool.The water was freezing.

We started splashing at each other.We played tag but we were slow because the water holds us back.We swam around the pool area, forward and back until we got tired.Finally, we stopped swimmng and changed our clothes to go home. 

My dad is my hero!

L.I-We are learning to write a recount about my local hero.

Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write and publish my story about my hero.

Dad is my hero because he takes me to my rugby training. He is kind and help me with my home work and when I'm stuck. He lets me play on his  Xbox 360 with my brother and my cousin . He buy me whatever I like. 

When I am outside playing with my brother he join in. Sometimes he takes me and my brother to the park to play and visit my cousin's house. My dad is my hero forever.

Botanic Garden.

L.I.-W.A.L.T.-write a recount using describing words.

Success Criteria: I can do this when I can write a recount about Botanic garden using describing word.

Three weeks ago we went for a trip to Botanic Garden. At Botanic gardens I saw colourful flowers like roses, daisies and lilies.There were yellow,red,white and blue flowers.They were pretty and beautiful.They smells like perfume.

Next we went to see the veggies garden. I saw carrots,fejoias, and  lemon trees.Then we went to the next activity.When we got there we saw a house and the teacher.We sat down and played a puzzle.We tried to think how to match the puzzle.

After that Sarah showed us a tiger worm and gave one for each group.We used a magnifying glass to look closely at the tiger worms.I saw that the body of the worms is covered with very tiny fine hair. 

Finally, we had our lunch.Later on we went back to school.I really enjoyed the school trip.