Fish makes good pets.-By George

Learning Intention: We are learning how to write persuasive writing.

Success Criteria: I am successful when I can persuade someone to agree with my argument. 

Fish make good pets because sometimes you don't need to look after them.They can  play with you.I like fish because they have colourful scales.Sometimes fish are fun because they jump up and down in the water. They can do tricks and show off by doing front flip and back flips and swimming around in circles. 

Fish are one of the smallest pets you can ever have in the world.