My little baby brothers birthday-By George

           MY baby brother birthday

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write paragraphs that begins with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.

Hooray! its my baby brother birthday. 

On a sunny holiday I went to my cousins house with my mum dad and brother, last week we have a BBQ because it was my cousins little brothers birthday.My uncle was cooking sausages, chicken leg and chicken stick with some veges in it.While it was cooking my cousin, brother and I put my little baby brother on the trolley and started taking him for a walk down the road.After that we push him next to the flowers, and he was steering at them, so we gave him a orange thick flower for him to hold.

Soon we went back and ate the food and it tasted very delicious.Later there were cakes and inside it had chocolate cream, with strawberry desert food . It was the yummiest cake I'v  ever had. 


One sunny holiday my parents and I went to my cousins house because it was my little cousins birthday and we had a BBQ.My uncle was cooking sausages,chicken leg and chicken stick with veges in it.While it was cooking my cousin and I put my baby cousin in the trolley and started taking him for a walk down the road.After that we put him next to the flower for him to look at.So we gave him a thick orange flower for him to hold

After a while we went back and started to eat the food that my uncle cooked, it was delicious.Then there were chocolate cakes, it had chocolate cream, cherry and strawberry dice'rt. 


Finally we played outside and played with my cousins and had lots of fun playing tag.

Mission day-By George

Learning intention:We are learning to write a recount using adjectives, verbs and adverbs.

Success Criteria:I am successful when I can use describing words, verbs and adjectives correctly.

Yey! its Mission day!!!

On Mission day St.Patrick school went to church.We sang many songs and prayed to God and Jesus.Next, we went back to our class room and set up our activities.We had fishing, books for sale and hanging apples.When the bell rang we went outside to play with the activities.

The first activities I played was fishing.I enjoyed it because I kept dropping the candy.Finally I caught one "chocolate fish" with my fishing rod and I ate it.Later , it was my turn to look after the fishing game.There were small children who came to play.

 I enjoyed watching the children.They pay more than 50 cents, so I gave them their change.After lunch, Mrs. Dines asked us to watch cartoons in room 8, we said 'yes'.We couldn't finish the movie as it was raffle time. We all gathered in front of room 6 under the big shade.

The teacher had to pick a ticket for a winner.A girl in room 8 won a prize.Next,she called out another ticket and it was me. I won a big Lego box! When another ticket was pulled out, I won a Lego box again, and everyone cheered and clapped for me.