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Monday 10 April 2017

Grandma's.- By George.

Learning Intention- W.A.L.T.-Write a recount. 

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I write a recount about grandpas using capital letters and full stops correctly.


It happened 2 years ago in the holidays.My family and I went to  to Tonga early in the morning of 4:00. We went to the airport and ride in the aeroplane. 
Finally we arrived at Tonga and I felt nervous. My grandpa pick us up, and I greeted him. He took our family to his house. When we got there I greeted my cousins, aunties, and grandma.


I played games with my cousin and brother outside. After we played we had dinner. We went to sleep early because it was my grandpas and aunties birthday the following day. The next day we got ready and we went to the place where my aunties and grandpas birthday were. When we arrive there it looked beautiful and clean.


I was thirsty so I drank Raro. We waited and waited until all the members of our family came. Together we sang happy birthday to grandpa and auntie.


Then we stand in front of everyone to perform our dance.While we were dancing everybody was cheering and clapping and I felt happy and it was fun.The funniest thing while dance was that our members gave money to us.Then we finish dancing.We collected all our moneys and gave it all to my auntie and my grandpa.


Later we changed into our normal clothes.Then we ate some cakes.It was very yummy.I had the best day ever.Later it became dark so we went back home.Finally we went to sleep for the next day.