School holidays-By George

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount about my holidays.

''A swimming family!''
In the holidays my family and I went to the pools.We played ball tiggy in the kids pool.It was fun because I can hold my breath underwater and nobody could find me. We went to the cold pool.The water was freezing.

We started splashing at each other.We played tag but we were slow because the water holds us back.We swam around the pool area, forward and back until we got tired.Finally, we stopped swimmng and changed our clothes to go home.